Pit Bull Attack

ok this is the furst poem i have ever made and i think it sux but i wanna put it up so here

Pit Bull Attack
Why must we hear these words again
Pit Bull Attacks
You think its our fault that we attack
Why not keep these stories in a vault
Trust us its not our fault
Never trust the Press
You think you know everything
You tell your children think twice before approaching us cause well
Pit Bulls Attack
Poor kids cant even play with a dog
those hogs that say
Pit Bull Attack
they just dont look at the facts
look at the picture on the big screen
it says pit bull but really look at it
its a living thing not a monster
Im no adult but cut them some slack
next time you hear those words
Pit Bull Attacks kid, baby, or even another dog
Remember its the person who tought the dog to act that way
beleve all of wat u see and half of wat u hear
do not fear the pit for it is a friend not an enemy
just remember wen pit bulls attack they are sorry

That's a great poem! Don't say it sucks!

I always loved poems that told a realistic story and this one did, so yay!

aw thx but u dont have to say that lol

I love your poem Jill!
(You are Jillian right?)

thanks and ya its jill no worries lol

Haha.
Ok.
Just making sure that I wasnt calling someone else Jill.

lol i cant beleve they made cookie monster carrot monster im so ashamed lol