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PostSubject: poem-Do you understand my love for you?   poem-Do you understand my love for you? Icon_minitimeMon Mar 19, 2007 3:28 pm

Do you understand my love for you?

Do you understand my love for you,
Is just another thought.
A thought that runs inside me
My brain, my blood, my heart.
It won’t come out,
Not another will come in.
Because my love for you is different.
And a horrifying sin.
Do you understand my love for you,
Is just another thought.
A thought that runs inside me
My brain, my blood, my heart.
It runs so fast
I can’t keep up a bit.
Because my love for you is different.
I try but can not sit.
Do you understand my love for you,
Is just another thought.
A thought that runs inside me
My brain, my blood, my heart.
My heart can’t choose
Between the pain of love,
Or the pain of loneliness
Because my love for you is different.
My heart’s just a big mess.
Do you understand my love for you,
Is just another thought.
A thought that runs inside me
My brain, my blood, my heart.


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this was origonaly for myan but now it's for adem ! <3333


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PostSubject: Re: poem-Do you understand my love for you?   poem-Do you understand my love for you? Icon_minitimeMon Mar 19, 2007 6:49 pm

that rox Smile u rock lol
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i know ... lol .... and thanks
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Yet another gem I cannot just read and forget.
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PostSubject: Re: poem-Do you understand my love for you?   poem-Do you understand my love for you? Icon_minitimeTue Mar 20, 2007 10:10 am

it's funny cause sometimes i can't write at all and sometimes it just somes to me but i cant write half of it then come back later ... it has to come straight to you to make sence and it to actually see something in it you know
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PostSubject: Re: poem-Do you understand my love for you?   poem-Do you understand my love for you? Icon_minitimeSun Apr 01, 2007 4:25 pm

Hmmm... I kind of know what you mean, when I write poems I usually like to write it all at once and then come back and perfect it later. This is sooo good Leana! One of my favorites of yours on this site!
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well thank you ! this is my best poem !
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