the notebook writer Member
Number of posts : 49 Age : 29 Registration date : 2007-03-19
| Subject: poem -- amusement park Mon Apr 02, 2007 10:36 am | |
| for adem .....
Amusement Park
Amusement park That’s how I feel Because my stomach’s on The Ferris wheel And my heart’s on The twisty thing And my soul is on The thing with wings My eyes just came off The ride that spins like craz’ And my brain is in the maze My heart just slipped On the mountain climbing Yes this is how I feel I feel like I’m at the Amusement park | |
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the pitbulls voice Moderator
Number of posts : 78 Age : 30 Location : waiting for someone to understand me Registration date : 2007-02-12
| Subject: Re: poem -- amusement park Mon Apr 02, 2007 12:56 pm | |
| wow that was wow really good | |
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the notebook writer Member
Number of posts : 49 Age : 29 Registration date : 2007-03-19
| Subject: Re: poem -- amusement park Mon Apr 02, 2007 3:04 pm | |
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Tears_of_Thoth Admin
Number of posts : 215 Age : 31 Location : I'll give you a cookie for guessing. Which means a lot of cookies. Registration date : 2007-01-11
| Subject: Re: poem -- amusement park Fri Apr 06, 2007 3:28 pm | |
| Ooh, cool, that's exactly how I felt riding a small coaster a couple years ago- I'm not getting on it again! X_X | |
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the notebook writer Member
Number of posts : 49 Age : 29 Registration date : 2007-03-19
| Subject: Re: poem -- amusement park Wed Apr 11, 2007 9:49 am | |
| aw why ? .... i love this feeling ! | |
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C.o.o.k.i.e.M.o.n.s.t.e.r Moderator
Number of posts : 138 Age : 32 Registration date : 2007-01-12
| Subject: Re: poem -- amusement park Fri Apr 20, 2007 12:00 pm | |
| Wow. You are a really good Writer. None of my poems rhyme really, but this one does. | |
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the notebook writer Member
Number of posts : 49 Age : 29 Registration date : 2007-03-19
| Subject: Re: poem -- amusement park Mon Apr 23, 2007 2:49 pm | |
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Kristi Member
Number of posts : 24 Age : 32 Registration date : 2007-03-30
| Subject: Re: poem -- amusement park Tue May 08, 2007 3:11 pm | |
| That reminds me kind of of how I feel when I'm nervous.. lol. Or something like that. That's a really creative poem, Leana. I like it. | |
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